Thursday, February 9, 2006

Oldest Bluff...................... Comments

Rating: 5.0

FEEBLE lights,
cluttered rooms,
the tinkling of
sound, like a key
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DAVID GERARDINO
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***** ********* 10 February 2006

This gorgeous David. I love the pace of it too. 10 from Call your bluff expert! Tai

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 09 February 2006

'...like a key having intercourse with a broken lock' VERY nice! What a metaphor. But, it's the 'OLDEST BLUFF............. Good write, David. L

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