Thursday, September 14, 2006

Older Than Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Next stop I'll be there,
really nervous sitting in my chair.
Bus driver says 40 more minutes,
can't keep it together, falling to bits.
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David Darbyshire
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Francesca Johnson 27 September 2006

The end was totally unexpected. I thought the journey was to meet a blind date! So well done for the twist in the tail. Clever little piece, Dave (not YOU, the poem, ha ha) . Love, Fran xx

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Nalini Hebbar 14 September 2006

dave...life outside is harsher outside! ! ! ...of i go to jail...to come out looking younger! ! ! ...lol...love...nalini

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