Olde Tyme Comments

Your getting just a bit good now Morris, this is just a beautiful, subtle, and oh so wise poem. It's a piece you should be proud of.

A moving poem, showing consideration, love and wisdom Would you trade this feeling of serenity?

I am always taken by the good use of a metaphor and dance, particularly in it's social form, of the dance floor, is a good one. You employ it well, only suggesting at nostalgia rather than being blatent. A wonderful piece!