I’ve just had old yogurt on oatmeal with strawberry jam.
It’s better than corn flakes and marmalade with old stinky ham.
I say OLD yogurt because it was the last of last batch.....
which, at home, with yogurt-starter and fresh milk we hatch.
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Well you achieved the cuz brief with an octave of lines although into two stanzas it all divides, and no compost was fed by residual culture and you consumed it all to make a faecal sculpture (you try not rhyming culture with vulture) and as it got old so did this comment, well meaning of course, but ephemeral and spent.
Nicely done Mr.Edwards. i enjoyed your nice sense of humor thanks for this nice work
i thought old yogurt was expired.. i prefered toast bread with strawberry jam with coffee breakfast is done 😊😀😁