Old World Poem by M.J. Lemon

Old World

Rating: 5.0


Here it is
The meaning we've been
looking for
he said
gripping the shard
and pointing
right at the jag
that caused my blood
to run

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 19 March 2022

An exceptionally sharp poem that comes from the mind of a poet who never has a period of unrestained activity.

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M.J. Lemon 27 May 2022

Thank you, fellow poet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2022

I can't stand the word blood, scary to me, I can faint too, but still a strikingly impressive poem 5 Stars for you, Mr. Lemon Sir

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M.J. Lemon 08 February 2022

Thank you, Sylvia. So glad that the verse kept you reading. Thanks again.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 01 February 2022

No mean way to keep it going, Nice poem.5***

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M.J. Lemon 08 February 2022

So much appreciated, Asim

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2022

Sorry, M.J., but the 'brilliance' escapes my grasp. Please spell out more clearly what is meant in this poem. bri ;)

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M.J. Lemon 08 February 2022

It is only there for interpretation....like a good joke, it's told

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 January 2022

Brilliantly beautiful MJ

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M.J. Lemon 08 February 2022

Thank you, LeeAnn!

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