Old Woman Comments

Very vivid heartbreaking story of a old woman in pain and misery....many may be like her...lucky for us we have something to share? Liked it. Thanks for sharing sir!

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak for an inspiring comment.

It's not the load on her back that I see But a life of pain and adversity The real truth that it can only be A burden of poverty she carry - - - - - - - - - -A kind and sympathetic soul can understand the pains and sufferings of another human being. A very beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

Beautiful poem, I can picture the woman through yr words. Thanks for sharing

It's not the load on her back that I see But a life of pain and adversity The real truth that it can only be A burden of poverty she carry As to our life's daily and constant strife To this old woman born of tragedy And who have no power to enjoy life To my God I ask why this mystery? Verily, a very compassionate heart you possess and I think God has designed such miseries as a trial to test the love and compassion of humans........10

Well written. I could visualize the old woman as I read the poem.

a sad story about a poor old tattered woman. distinct imagery. good write

thanks Mr. Mistra, I tried to comment on your poems, but there is a problem with my computer every time I comment. I'll resolve this issue as soon as possible. cheers.

good one. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.