Thursday, October 21, 2010

Old Wall Clock Comments

Rating: 4.3

Tik tak tok
Goes the old wall clock.
The very same old way it did before.
I wonder if it will do it once more.
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Thomas Duncky
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Khairul Ahsan 09 May 2014

It's a beautiful poem. Looking at the old wall clock, you've revisited its role in your childhood, and imagined its role in the distant future when you will be 'long gone'! So wonderfully done!

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Princess Lilypad 31 August 2013

year after year after year...tick tock it's a terrifying ride that doesn't stop. Well constructed, with a hint of sadness.

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