Old Toys Comments

The old toys may be reclaimed.Very nicely penned.10+++

मेरे वो पुराने खिलौने, जिन्हें देख कर, आज भी मेरा मन बच्चा बनने की इच्छा कर जाता।। मेरी भूली बिसरी यादों को यह ताजा जो कर जाता, कुछ अपनी कह जाता, कुछ मेरी सुन जाता । You revived my some old memories. Thankyou so much for sharing such a beautiful poem

In a nostalgic wave, you have nicely recalled several things which were essentially arranged along with the acts undertaken by parents to ensure their babies' comfort and normal, happy and healthy growth. Later on, when the children come of age, these things get stored in some nook of the house. The concluding lines assume a mystical tone. Thanks, Jasbir ji.

मेरे वो पुराने खिलौने, जिन्हें देख कर, आज भी मेरा मन बच्चा बनने की इच्छा कर जाता।। मेरी भूली बिसरी यादों को यह ताजा जो कर जाता, कुछ अपनी कह जाता, कुछ मेरी सुन जाता ।। You revived my some old memories. Thankyou so much for sharing such a beautiful poem

मेरे वो पुराने खिलौने, जिन्हें देख कर, आज भी मेरा मन बच्चा बनने की इच्छा कर जाता।। मेरी भूली बिसरी यादों को यह ताजा जो कर जाता, कुछ अपनी कह जाता, कुछ मेरी सुन जाता ।। Thankyou so much, You revived my old memories. It's so nice poem. Thankyou for sharing.. Sharad bhatia

A delicate free verse with delightful poetic expression! Loved reading this joyous poem.....10/10

Children are very fond of toys. They play with these. Children love playing and we feel this truth. When they grow older these are hang up hither and dither. Sometimes they reclaim the toys. Great meaningful life shines with wonderful sensation. Memories are great for them. This poem is interestingly penned.