Old Ted Of The Cut Comments

Fascinating. I wonder what he dreams about. Ez X

Astute observation that gives rise to a great piece of characterisation - I think we may all have come across someone with attributes like Old Ted's. A vivid portrayal that conveys your understanding of human nature. Justine x

Poor old Ted - hanging on so tightly to his rage. Great description and the last line adds a touch of humanity - which lifts the poem, beautifully. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

Francesca, I think I know an 'Old Ted' who was not only a son but also a father. In fact my paternal grandfather. Which in effect means I don't know him all that well. Yet you have described him with great clarity. Thank you for that! Regards, Ivan

Francesca, Ahhh poor Ted, unloved by anyone. Such a sad tale, but so beautifully written down. The observation and detail always pristine. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Poor Ted, perhaps his lover left him, or he was a bandoned as a child. Nice observation Francesca, perhaps you should tell him you've immortalised him on the internet. I gave you a ten for caring. Bob