Friday, September 14, 2018

Old Shoes Comments

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Her old shoes were showing signs of age…for so many years they had been worn.
that dirt had gathered ‘round the edges..and the toe of one was torn…

So she bought herself an new pair…but she hasn't worn them yet
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Rajnish Manga 14 September 2018

Old memories don't go away easily. Jim, you have expressed it through the story of old shoes. Thanks for this sweetly rhymed poem.

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