Thursday, October 31, 2013

Old Rusted Truck Comments

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He sat in his old rusting truck
Feeling his age, and out of luck;
To his daughter-in-law
An impossible burden
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David McLansky
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Elaine Sept 07 December 2013

So thought filled David. With my luck my horn will get stuck!

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We are destined to be old rusty trucks After a million miles on life's highway Obsolete models with no fuel or luck Just eyesores with wheels and tons of rust........ Great poem Sir and welcome to my page too

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David McLansky

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