Friday, September 1, 2017

Old River Trail Comments

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You walk along a long path
Through trees that you feel
Are enveloping you
You look around at the scenery
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Julie Rodeheaver
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Captain Cur 02 September 2017

Many places have such trails. Many remain constant for years, others age rapidly. This poem evokes memories of the writer's experiences but also elicits memories from the reader with imagery and the end lines repetition add a haunting quality to the poem.

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