Old Pond Comments

This is very good. Open for so many interpretations I think this is really top class poetry, my friend

so sad, spiritual seeker. Our country India has rich water sources, still the problem can not be solved and we are like the frogs, croaking without any benefits...Only three lines, but has so much of meaning..Well done!

old pond dried old thoughts merged up frogs lay in soft mud innocence still in comforts hot sun, cloudless sky hope no avail let old pond wet in rains anew! !