Old Photo Comments

So true. old cards and photos reminders of something lost but never forgotten. Lovely

Emotions spilled upon the page in the form of words have painted pictures in the mind of a dreamer... Another very powerful poem... Well done...

Cling..........That was awesome, i love the idea and structure..and the end just perfect, so emotional and i can feel the brokenness....be ware dont keep the glass, it will make you bleed... :) _Nice penned_Unwritten Soul

I understand that pain, , you written here it well.. A beautiful poem..

it has a gud concept but try to make it more profound so others can understand the pain