Monday, February 18, 2008

Old People Comments

Rating: 4.0

the mind a simple but complicated place.
as it grows old, things just start to erase,
the memories of the long loved,
the family members of lost,
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Katie Unknown
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 June 2008

I really like this poem and I gave it an 8. There is one element that I found to be most curious. The selection of the word twist as the last word here is quite a bit odd. I would never have chosen a word like this in the context of the discussed subject here. It is simply out of place. Very odd. GW62

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