Tuesday, July 29, 2025

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A chemistry teacher, we called him Lawrencium, unstable and short of life
Like a ministry preacher, his ten commandments the periodic table and strife
He didn't know any of what he taught, left white phosphorus out of the water
As with fists a girl he fought, blew up the lab narrowly avoided a slaughter
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Tsuki no Ume 29 July 2025

Its hauntingly eerie yet very beautiful...whimsy and thought provoking...its well written...and the right rhymes and words were an absolute and perfect choice...had me thinking..♡Keep up the goodwork! ! Your work and poetry both are admirable

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