Thursday, January 3, 2008

***old Man So Young Comments

Rating: 2.9

Old man so young
Old tricks, new belt, old bag o’ nails
New shoes, same feet, now going flat
To me, a young man, so full of heart
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Bob Blackwell 09 January 2008

Loved the meter loved the poem, this is very well writ. Bob

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Marcus Czarnecki 06 January 2008

Reminds me of Mr Bojangles Thank you Marcus

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Duncan Wyllie 04 January 2008

Looking on at the guy who you still see so much strength and dignity in brilliantly placed Love duncan X

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John Nightingale 04 January 2008

I love this. Brilliant concept.

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Broken Peaces 03 January 2008

Clever use of words great content 10 Chris

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