Old Man In The Park Comments

Oh yes, this is a grand poem. I feel it, deep, in the region of the soul. Very, very well done Bert. A 10-plus in my book! ! !

am doing just fine sir a little bit chilly this morning and rain too... those paper stock in my glove compartment has lots of stories too..very nice poem you have here sir thanks

Unending journeys down the memory lane is, no doubt, a compulsion of the old age and old people try to derive joy and satisfaction through them. A beautifully penned realistic write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.