Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Old Man Bad Luck Comments

Rating: 4.5

I keep trying to do things right
but things always seem to do me wrong.
My eyes, they are open but only see one way,
Old Man Bad Luck comes from the other side
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Jesse Ellsbury
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Kevin Halls 30 July 2013

A powerful poem or song it stands up well either way. I like the lines each of us is a Flag we should be allowed to unfurl. Very good Jesse!

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