Thursday, October 2, 2008

Old Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gnarled hands, shaking, grip the worn stick
Groping the way for blind eyes,
This man knows nothing but his pain
And his sorrow for lost friends!
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St.Claire Redwood
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Alf Hutchison 08 April 2009

This is a beautiful piece..I had to read it again and again...that is the excitement of this site... you can read through piles of Kimberlite then find a diamond like this. Don't ever stop writing. I am that old man...Alf...check me out sometime.

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Tanya Stanford 02 October 2008

Very dramatic and sad. Another Brilliant write.

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David Threadgold 02 October 2008

Very sad the thought of waiting for the inevitable and not being able to see the sunlight. a very well written piece well done Regards Dave T

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Sandra Fowler 02 October 2008

A powerful word portrait.10 for this. Kind regards, Sandra

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St.Claire Redwood

St.Claire Redwood

Johannesburg, South Africa
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