Old Lady Wheels Comments

thank goodness you left a poet's note. otherwise i would have lain awake tonight wondering if the old lady used a wheelchair or...................? poet's notes are always welcome, except the kind i've seen left by some Indian (i think) poets, who seem to just recite the poem in a different/prose way in their poet's notes! and i liked your PH bio: short and sweet, as we sometimes say. yes, you WERE fortunate to have her. i liked that you repeated old lady wheels at the end of each stanza. bri :) welcome to PH! !