Sunday, July 17, 2016

Old Lady Trolley Comments

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I bought a trolley
An old lady shopping trolley
So that I could carry my heavy food
Without my arms aching
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 28 August 2016

OH, MY GOD! i just used louse in my latest poem! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - your line: I've caught nits... from online: nit nit/ noun noun: nit; plural noun: nits the egg or young form of a louse or other parasitic insect, especially the egg of a head louse attached to a human hair. now you may become a nit-picker! tough day? try a little cannabis! - - - - - - - - - - - - - yes, i agree with your choice of topics for PH. funny and life how about if i slip this into Section A of September 2016's showcase for PH poets? ? yes? YES! ! ! excellent! ! ! thanks, Della. bri :)

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