Sunday, November 20, 2016

Old Kite Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark brown, with battered weather-beaten feathers,
he loves to perch on the railing at the building top
from his high seat surveying the world beneath him.
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Malsawmi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

0 0 Reply
Rajnish Manga 25 November 2016

Nice poem. Old age has been aptly compared with a worn out kite. Thanks for sharing the poem.

0 0 Reply
Malsawmi Jacob 26 November 2016

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

0 0
Spock The Vegan 20 November 2016

Not a bad start for your first poem. Thanks for sharing. I'll give you 10 points.

1 0 Reply
Malsawmi Jacob 20 November 2016

Thanks, Spock, for reading and giving high points. Much encouraged.

0 0
Close
Error Success