Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, March 18, 2014

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The legend says “not all that glitters is gold”
It also says ‘not all braves are bold”
But experience comes from passing of an age
There shall be intense urge to come out from the cage
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 March 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 18 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

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Luz Joveres likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome luz a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

I like the message of traditions and it's a good write, aside from a few choices of words. I absolutely agree that we've lost a lot of what was good in the past but I also think we have come a long way from where we've been. I would like to see another side to this poem! Perhaps an evil twin write? Either way, good show.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

Hi Jace Mordigal13 minutes ago Hi

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

The legend says “not all that glitters is gold” It also says ‘not all braves are bold”

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