The legend says “not all that glitters is gold”
It also says ‘not all braves are bold”
But experience comes from passing of an age
There shall be intense urge to come out from the cage
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Luz Joveres likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome luz a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
I like the message of traditions and it's a good write, aside from a few choices of words. I absolutely agree that we've lost a lot of what was good in the past but I also think we have come a long way from where we've been. I would like to see another side to this poem! Perhaps an evil twin write? Either way, good show.
The legend says “not all that glitters is gold” It also says ‘not all braves are bold”
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 18 hours ago · Unlike · 1