Thursday, June 19, 2014

Old Is Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

Neither you're a teen aged girl,
Nor I'm a naughty boy,
The romance with its twist and curl,
And the youth with all its joy,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 07 October 2019

A beautiful poem to read.

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Khalid Saifullah 28 December 2014

A beautiful write.................10

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 July 2014

Wonderful poem..I liked the youthful spirit you brought in this poem. Very true said one must be young at heart.. The concluding lines are beautiful.... Don't behave like an old, I am silver you're gold.

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Amitava Sur 22 June 2014

very nice to read finding to keep the hopes alive and not getting perturbed by the odds.

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Umna Ahmad 22 June 2014

nice one... proud of you

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Valsa George 19 June 2014

Having a youthful spirit is more important and keeps one young, no matter how old he grows... Your exhortation to your dear one is very inspiring! I particularly liked the lines... .Don't behave like an old, I am silver you're gold.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 19 June 2014

Nice poem. I like this poem very much. Specially the last two lines, DON'T BEHAVE LIKE AND OLD, I AM SILVER YOU'RE GOLD. Yes, I also saying these two lines to you. Always stay with me. Always. Forever.

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V P Mahur 19 June 2014

Dear Bro, very sweet and lovely. only you can write such a nice thought. Thanks for your appreciation.

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