Old Is Alive Gold Inpp Me Poem by me poet yeps poet

Old Is Alive Gold Inpp Me

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OLD IS GOLD

I dream of the wonderland
there
but when I am no more
here
I skip the beauty of life
I leave
hoping for something more
beyond the horizon
of thinkable existence

when we are no more
but
in a supercilious hope
we live
to hopefully return
as having been reborn
to relay heaven's lovelier
than one over here
anyone can ever say
the
most beautiful
EARTH
ours
mine at least

but

who will you voice your feelings to
a body since released to eternity
no one will be here
to listen
my friendly ones to thee

just believe me
I have been

beyond the beyond

and

safely returned
as my body had not been burned
my heart started thumping again
all ‘twas not in vain
my body totally intact did remain

so I know
what is life
only here
but not there
be glad
not sad
nowhere
else

Sunday, May 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,poetic expression,real life,rebirth,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Believe me I really died (1977)
not knowing how what happened
Then came alive
+-5 minutes of my life was unknown
Till I was pulled out
from under a truck
I don't know what ever happened
in those few minutes

Don't believe me
ask my spouse
you are free
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

who will you voice your feelings to a body since released to eternity no one will be here to listen my friendly ones to thee just believe me I have been beyond the beyond

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

safely returned as my body had not been burned my heart started thumping again all ‘twas not in vain my body totally intact did remain

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 May 2019

PH TYPO IN PP ME =POET POET ME

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 May 2019

OLD is GOLD! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! leave the NEW leave the NEW leave the NEW NONE can do it; very a FEW OLD is GOLD in NEW VIEW; REVIEW.................

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Srijita Mondal 26 May 2019

1000000000000000000000000000000000000+++++++++++++ belief... I also want that death before death to know death at least to get a glimpse of death

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

I believe you....dear poet...I was on the same boat....I died and after few minutes I came back to live..but not like Lazarus.....thanks

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

hoping for something more beyond the horizon of thinkable existence.....1000000000+++++

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

so I know what is life only here but not there be glad not sad nowhere else....

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