Wednesday, August 6, 2008

Old High School Photos Comments

Rating: 4.5

and for a fleeting moment

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Jim Norausky
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Carolyn Brunelle 29 January 2009

Poignant flavor to this piece that is easily recognized by all. Another wonderful write! !

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Al Ramos 13 January 2009

I'm quite the opposite, I don't want the moment to be fleeting and I stare at the pictures for a long time wishing time had no expiration date.

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Sonny Rainshine 03 January 2009

You've really captured a lot of feeling here. Your poems make me stop and reflect. You should write more.

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Kevin Wells 06 August 2008

I don't know how you manage to say so much with so few words. You have a talent for it.

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John Lambremont, Sr. 06 August 2008

Interesting thought. I imagine some wishes were benevolent and others malevolent, still others lustful.

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