Sunday, September 4, 2016

Old Hands Comments

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Holding Mom's hand, as I say goodnight
In a now too familiar hospital setting,
I see behind the thin translucent skin,
The hands that carried and cleaned and cared;
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Kim Barney 04 September 2016

This is wonderful poem, Bill. A classic, I say, and it goes on my favorites list. Nothing less than a ten. As you talked about your relatives, I saw my own father, mother, and grandmother. And I loved the way you ended it, with the word HANDS having an entirely different meaning. Fabulous job!

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Bill Galvin 11 September 2016

Thanks so much, Kim... it's that time of life when perspective slowly changes.

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