Old Hag Comments
In the dead of night while the peaceful sleep
In through my window demons creep
While all are lost in sleeps embrace
With nightmares I come face to face
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A very good poem; imagery and language excellent. Hag-ridden indeed, but holds some magic for me. Regards.
This reminds me of my childhood. I would place myself in the very middle of my bed because I was sure there were 'something' that could get me if I hung over the edge. Thankfully, I outgrew it! Great poem. Marilyn
creepy...... really nicely written. feels like you're talking. lovely beat!
D & G, Please let me ask the question ... Is it Doom and Gloom? , or Gloom and Doom ? , ... with that attitude? ... OR Harry Houdini? B.V.A.
Loved it! A chilling poem perfect for reading late at night or near Halloween! -chuck
Whew! That's some heavy stuff...and all too real... even in the daylight. See my 'CHAOS' for a similar perspective. Robert
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7/27/2025 3:41:10 PM # 1.0.0
i liked that one......... and some very true i know it is for my children sometimes....... thanks