Monday, August 31, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Has the ball finally fell to rest
Upon your stately, broken breast?
Has the golden trumpet lost it’s tune
Amongst the flowers all in bloom?
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J.A McManus
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Marieta Maglas 05 October 2009

It is a symbolistic poem, very well written. The noble soul of the poet is evident and the words have the necessary depth to convey the message.Lovely to read......10+++++++++

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Marcella D 31 August 2009

oh how sad of a poem you have made

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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