Sunday, March 18, 2007

Old Forbidden Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see you across a crowded room
My heart flutters, my cheeks flush
Everthing becomes sharper in my view
But I see, only you
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Michelle Tiddy
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What a perfect, bittersweet ending to a touching, all-too-real composition. t x

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Marci Made 18 March 2007

The one we let slip away, perhaps by choice, perhaps not.....This is different though for they went beyond the years and the eyes meeting (in one I wrote they turn away) and finally reconnected, if only briefly, before the 'nervous, ' hesitant laugh as they 'yet again' we're walking away..........Pretty much sums up longing and loss here, yet in a beautiful, not morose, yet lifting way...like this lots...marci :)

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

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