Old Flame Comments

Raw without the wishy washy sentiments of the typical clichéd love poem, in fact this is not a love poem in the romantic sense but in the social sense, two people compatible is based on the fact that they are outsiders of a society that would never be able to love them. We offset rather than complemented, the motto for a freak like me. Wonderful stuff, it needs to be shared and read

Raw without the wishy washy sentiments of the typical clichéd love poem, in fact this is not a love poem in the romantic sense but in the social, two people compatible is based on the fact that they are outsiders of a society that would never be able to love them. We offset rather than complemented, the motto for a freak like me. Wonderful stuff, it needs to be shared and read!

Raw with honesty, and withdrawing of the wishy washy sentimentality of typical love poems, except this isn't a love poem in the romantic sense, its a love poem for a human being whose own disadvantages compliment the authors imperfections We offset rather than complemented, is a beautiful thing sentiment, and for a freak like me, the motto of my love life. There is none of the saccharine elements that define your typical love poem, great poem of the day. Read this and Share it!

I miss her. Nice work with past memories.