Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Old Flame Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smoldering ashes of a long forgotten fire
Stirred with stick of wanton desire
The flame first blue, then red, then white
It burns too hot and reason takes flight
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Lindo Mvelase 17 September 2009

nice fair and short..good. the metaphor is very perfect i like it

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 16 September 2009

A very fine verse on love and nearness.

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