Monday, October 10, 2011

Old Flame Comments

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I want to hug the old flame tight
To burn me bit by bit and lay with ashes
Gray and gay
Merrily watching the old flame soar the evenin’ star
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Agnes Quirante
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Miriam Maia Padua 12 October 2011

nicely written.. meaningful and flows with depth.. keep on writing....

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Ency Bearis 10 October 2011

Good symbolic cogitations, written eloquently. Keep up the good work young lady.

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Agnes Quirante

Agnes Quirante

La Trinidad, Philippines
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