Friday, October 13, 2017

Old Fence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love old fences…they remind me of an era…
an age that was simple and slow.
They are rustic, pastoral…picturesque…
and harken to a time long ago.
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Jim Yerman
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Chinedu Dike 13 October 2017

Beautiful rendition of words embellished in poetic rhyme. Insightful. Thanks for sharing Jim.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

They span generations…they are a link to our past… In the present…they can still be our guide… Yu have wisely said everything here. Books are valuable ever. Enjoyed a brilliant reading here...10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 October 2017

Enjoyed this textbook example of Contemporary Free Verse with an A, B, A, B Rhyme Scheme to boot...Structural movement fluxes well line to line throughout...Stellar crafting, Jim ~FjR-17~

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