Sunday, September 24, 2017

Old English 800 And A Bag Of Pretzels Comments

Rating: 5.0

Escalator, stop...
Let the malt-liquor light
Of this Autumn afternoon
Never fade;
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Shannon Walker
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Sandra Erickson 27 September 2017

The secret life of the poet, where those mere (and nearly perfect) moments become art, forever. You had me at the first four lines. Well done.

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Rini Shibu 24 September 2017

Liquor, music, nicotine pop, burning cigerette..the moment which you want to last forever..good one

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The Crow 24 September 2017

Reminded me a days long gone, sitting on the porch drinking a Colt45, I remember the Old English 800 days before the 40s came out. Cool memory.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

Peddling ice cream in the street continue to play. Amazing idea is presented in this wisely penned poem here.10

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