Tuesday, September 19, 2006

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It had snowed all the night
Carrying on into the day
Now it was late afternoon
It had finally ceased
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Scarlett Treat 19 September 2006

I think this is SO funny! Beautifully described, I expected a fairy tale ending, like Aladdin's magic lamp. Instead I got a 'been there, done that, and all I got was a lousy tee shirt' ending of a bad cold. VERY funny and well done.

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Steve Hagget 19 September 2006

great finish to a really good poem which is also a great story! S

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