Thursday, May 21, 2015

Old Dog Comments

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That old dog labored and jumped to his feet
As his angel of mercy pulled in off the street
He managed a few barks, staggered about
With gentle coaching he even went out
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Nancy Butterworth
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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

*Human existence has been improved because of dogs. Great poem! I want to thank you for mentoring my dear friend, Ayman. I hope to see more posts by you both.

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Nance Butterworth 06 November 2015

I learn as much from Ayman as he does from me. Thank you for your kind comment. I am honored that a popoet of your caliber enjoys reading my work.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 May 2015

Wow an awesome well rhymed narrative on man's best friend written in sentimental lyrical way that is so commendable. Yay nice to reminisce as u have done poetically on an old dog passed away. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too titled pop goes.....

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Ayman Parray 22 May 2015

There is a place for every creature in heaven. Beautiful poem. Thanks Nancy for caring and sharing.

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