Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Old Days Comments

Rating: 3.8

I miss the old days, in many hours, in many ways
We went to school on foot
Winter days on the snow, we did play and scoot
Stories were made on the way, every day
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Akhtar Jawad 01 August 2019

Man loves of his past, dislikes his present and dreams for his future. So are you and so is me. A beautiful poem.

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Hassan Hayati 02 August 2019

Sir Jawad, thank you so much for this comment, Yes this is true, I really think the past was much better.

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Amir Marandi 03 January 2019

Great poem. Vividly describing and painting the places and events. It brought back a lot of old memories.

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Hassan Hayati 05 January 2019

Yes Amir, I mean considering the old days reminding, and I like to say thanks for your attention

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

The memories of the past float on the river mind. At present we get pleasure from childhood memories how we were going to school, how we were playing with quarreling sometimes and were swimming in the ponds or rivers. Dear Hayati, you have so nicely and stunningly inscribed these memories in this poem. The last stanza is most touching and meaningful. Thanks for sharing.10

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Hassan Hayati 04 December 2017

Dear Kumar, it is another reason that I believe you are a support, and Yes I really miss the old days.

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