Sunday, June 10, 2007

Old Day Charms Comments

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aunty's watch was worth more
than a thousand battery driven watches

it afforded us the golden moment
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john tiong chunghoo
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Vincent James Turner 10 June 2007

i very much like your poems that are written in this style, i have read much of your work over the last few months, although i rarely comment, you have a strong unique voice, and its sings volumes in this poem. there is strong moral and poetic lesson in this peice, and it comes acorss well, without forcing itself down the readers throat. best wishes Robin

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Megan Vue 10 June 2007

this is a very good one. it talks about the truth and also it talks about the past. i like this one. very different and i like the title.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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