Monday, July 20, 2020

Old Before Your Time Comments

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No place to run, no place to hide,
Oh how the bright lights shine,
all the bad news, I let it slide,
don't wanna be old before my time.
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Peter Strugnell
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Chinedu Dike 24 August 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Peter Strugnell 18 August 2020

Thank you Don Kubicki for taking the time to read and comment, thanks for pointing out the error, I've gone back and corrected it. It should read " don't wanna be old before my time" , (if I can help it)

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 August 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Peter S. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Peter Strugnell

Peter Strugnell

Portsmouth, UK
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