Sunday, November 2, 2014

Old And New Comments

Rating: 5.0

Father shown the brow,
Son do well, have dreams,
Don't swell,
You need to grow,
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 November 2014

Very well thought out piece scripted beautifully with touching words........amazing piece

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

You are a retired young, I am growing young, ....nice...enjoyed

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 November 2014

Beautiful and thoughtful observation on Old and New. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 02 November 2014

Funny and expressive, excellent and heart touchable. May your pen flow with excellent imagery ever to flow with serviceable observation. Outstanding poem old and new.10@10

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Saheb Mohapatra 02 November 2014

a beautiful and imaginative conversation between an old and a young............very nice thoughts.

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Aftab Alam

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