Old Age And Out To Pasture Comments

while in our teens everything is great at 20 - everything seems to be fate at 30 - we're in our prime at 40- we become sublime at 50- we go downhill at 60- we lose our will at 70- they say it's time at 80- we've lost our mind at 90- it's our time to go at 100- your guess is as good as mine but we're working overtime..will have to depart at destined time....loveedtoreadthe timetable....10 read mine............fine without you

Lol...nice work my brother....They say you are as old as you feel....get yourself a lovely blonde 21 year old......that should put the spring back in your step....Just kidding.............Great poem...This had me smiling all the way through....Refreshing piece.....

Very nice and funny too. I have to agree and at same time have to disagree too. Even at 20 or 60 we shouldn't lose our will.You made me to break into laugh with your ending line which apparently is true. High marks to the creativity you had shown in this piece.

I'm glad to see the fun side of you Louis. Enjoyed the creativity in the short, sweet life of it all..

This is a very fun poem.. Yet, the case is, I feel like going out at times. I mean life is not just a smooth boat ride isn't it? ? ? this is good... very well written..10+++/.. Liked your concept.. regards Shan

in t he bible time some lived for more than 500 years.. good poem... i like it..

yes we sure are over working...a lovely poem on the mind and body abilitues of each age....10