Monday, June 12, 2017

Old Age Comments

Rating: 5.0

Buds burst forth from the trees in spring
Leaves reappear once again
Withstand winter when cold dooms the leaves.
Eagle emerge from  hibernation
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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

An inspiring write. ++10

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 25 September 2017

The conditions change in life Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles Allow your inner beauty to shine Regain the power and ability. It encouraged to keep power in old age.it is a wonderful and a very courageous poem.so thank a lot Riding jerry

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thanks sounds, glad that you liked it

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Mark Otieno 21 August 2017

wow! its beautiful i like it!

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Rini Shibu 21 August 2017

Thank you so much Mark for reading this poem

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Akhtar Jawad 09 August 2017

Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles Allow your inner beauty to shine Regain the power and ability............................great encouraging thought, a beautiful poem.

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Rini Shibu 10 August 2017

Thanks for your kind words Akhtar

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Saadat Tahir 22 June 2017

The conditions changes in life Hair turns gray and skin wrinkles Allow your inner beauty to shine well said..a snap shot that captures the relentless montage... nice...more in inmail.... liked

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Rini Shibu 23 June 2017

Thank you so much sat... Rini

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 June 2017

wow what a beautiful concept from a young one I am yet to learn as advanced I am in age at this stage wow poet wow

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Rini Shibu 17 June 2017

Am thankful for being in this ocean of wonderful poets..

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Kim Barney 14 June 2017

Great poem, Rini. Thanks for inviting me to read it. I especially like the first two lines. Incidentally, I also have a poem with the same title.

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Thanks kim..read your poem...stay young at heart life long.

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Egwu Collins 14 June 2017

inspiration poem such glamour

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Thanks Collins... Rini

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M Sagnik Das 14 June 2017

wow what a poem mam....hats off! ! !

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Rini Shibu 14 June 2017

Thanks sagnik..

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Sandra Feldman 14 June 2017

Nice poem. A lot of intuition for someone so young.

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Rini Shibu 14 June 2017

Thanks Sandra... Rini

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Kishore Kumar Das 14 June 2017

Our body may be ageing.....but mind can't age...this philosophy reflected in your nice poem..

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Rini Shibu 14 June 2017

Thanks Kishore.. Rini

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Olugbenga Ayoola 13 June 2017

i like ur wonderful poem, allow ur inner beauty to shine, it mean dt dont loss hope even ur tree leave is wither and ur bub is bone, even ur eagle feather is weak dont relent.

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Rini Shibu 13 June 2017

Thanks Ayoola... Rini

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