Old Age Comments

Fantastic poetic touch down with toppings of irony...! Ten++ niv

The more I read it, the more I like it. Catchy and succinct. My kind of writing..(smile)

Skillful writing Joe. It has a great flow and a surprise and extremely effective ending. 10 love Karin

This 10 liner write made to read it twice. Well Said.

Splendid! Vivid! ! Lucid! ! ! A big hand Joe, with smiling ten dr. sakti

there is the otherside to futility of old age.the years of happy, happenings, experiences of life all add.up to our state of mind.your poem ofcourse speaks of eternal truth! from dust.........to dust we shall go.good write

a very nice piece..as time moves, age increases too..

really sad this body should age..we have to be prepared for the catch

an enjoyable write........of old age.......we have to accept........thank you for your kind sharing.....