Sunday, April 26, 2009

Old Age. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My shadow leaps across the street,
And rests upon a slender tree.
It’s limbs are bent down in an ark,
By some wind song after dark.
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Lazarus Knix
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have pondered the tree’s philosophy “Longevity within standing still! ” Yet an anchored life is agony ‘Least wisdom be one’s only will........ fine pieace of work indeed. beautiful i m impdressed... rad mine old age home

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Indira Renganathan 26 April 2009

Yet an anchored life is agony ‘Least wisdom be one’s only will. I’ll take his nature up one day- For now I jump, bleed and play. Wonderful lines on old age....I like the poem through out, , , congrats

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Christine Kerr 26 April 2009

You covered a little boys shawdow beautifully and his imagination to go with it A 10+++ well worth it

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