Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Old Acquaintance Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met my teenage self the other day,
She stepped out of the note-books that I'd kept
And looked at me accusingly. Except
In trivialities, there was no way
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Mary Spain
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Khairul Ahsan 18 July 2013

That, whereas I admire my clear-eyed youth, Her understanding couldn't stretch to me. A nice poem. Teen age and matured age visions very nicely juxtaposed. The concluding two lines are simply superb! .10/10.

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