Oklahoma Dawn Comments

The poem presents a very lively landscape of Edmond Oklahoma particularly associated with its colourful sunrise scenes which you are so fond of. You have very truthfully and with a sense of gratitude portrayed the place and the life there of. You have rightly said 'The beautiful dawn and the rising sun at once become a symbol of life for me in so many ways'. Enjoyed the graphic details presented by the poem and the matching pic. Thanks for sharing.

(cont.) 2 - e.g. “dark brown rooftops that are as sleepy as people living in it” & “coming of dawn is like a sweet calling rising in my heart to go on with my day's business with a cheerful vitality.” BUT, please curb your exuberance! at least don a bathrobe before running down the street in nightgown, so as to not provoke UNwanted attention from men in your neighborhood! ! ! To MyPoemList I’ll be passing through OK on way to NC this month. Bri (:

1 - ...written some time back ? ? ? ? i WONDER how LONG ago some time back IS! ! ! ! you are no spring chicken, my friend. what 'grade' was your son in 'then', or is he a teacher now and you drive him to school. though i did not recognize it as a poem and you admitted as much in your Poet's Notes, it had a hint of poesy with some of your creative writing. (cont.)

A wonderfully descriptive account of the Oklahoma dawn! You have gifted us with a rich experience though we are not there to witness such a heavenly dawn! This is the power of an artist and poet! Though you couldn't paint the scene using a brush and palette, you have sketched a mesmerizing scene using your pen! Enjoyed every single detail of it! A sure 10

The memories of beautiful O.K. dawn from winter to spring are beautifully narrated in this excellent reflective poem. This is a very brilliant poem shared here.10