Friday, July 7, 2006

Oillusionary Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanna be the one that turns you on
Be there til' the lonely's gone
Don't tell me this feelin' is all wrong
I wanna be the one you wake up with
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ebone' Ingram 25 August 2006

I've been hit with those very same feelings before...but it didn't work out. The two people you've mentioned here are bound to make it work, though *cheshire grin* eni da kid

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Duncan Wyllie 09 July 2006

You really shine your depth of feeling in this one, take good care and see life in the small things, the centre of the daisy the Childrens smile, laugh, smile, eternal while... Love duncan X

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Ray Forever 07 July 2006

Such a tender n sweet poem...and it rhymes perfectly.Im sure the two in question are also matched perfectly. Love

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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