Oil Slick Comments

A powerful metaphor that carries to the surface the intensity of a pain that resonates all too familiarly. A creative idea executed with skilled writing. Bravo, good poet. :) S

I love your choice of imagery, metaphor... it is so well connected :)

..The price I paid to unearth you Far too high It escalated beyond the scope.. Love and it's ups and downs. And we move forward, thank you so much for sharing..

A beautiful poem indeed. Sad but very nice to read. Thanks for posting.